Here we are,
like something just made;
two figures painfully carved out of hard feelings
since forgiven -
splintery, perhaps, in some still rough places,
but not unlovely for unfinished works.
In our new state we have found each other's love,
'though it was never missing...
needing only a chisel.
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Author:
Tonya Titus (
Offline) - Published: January 31st, 2026 12:58
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This is a marvelous poem with such a wonderful metaphor that fits it so well. It speaks with its splinters and chips rough and yet not so raw but more finished in its incompleteness lies its charm. A fave
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You are most welcome
Read it a couple of times. A lovely poem!
Thank you
lovely. especially
two figures painfully carved out of hard feelings
Some people have flaws and these flaws are what make them beautiful. Nobody is perfect. If anyone says they are they are lying. I enjoyed your poem very much.
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