Very harsh it is,very deep
A bleeding wound no one sees,
When every struggle goes invain..
O Fate! Why you gave me this pain?
The demand is of sacrifice and sweat
And so i gave you all that you said..
It's a deal you made for success and peace
O Fate! Why you backed out from the deal?
Collecting the hope and strength left,
I wish to keep up with life's test
But then, what's the point..?
O Fate! Will you still disappoint?
Thoughts are vacant,heart is full
Nothing to imagine,nothing to feel
But a rising conflict inside me
Should I try again or am i being a fool?
After nights spent crying and screaming
I stand weaker than before against my fate
But i will keep standing while I'm still living,
And will rest when death comes to end my fate...
Rirano_writes
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There is a sense of persistence in this poem a resolute determination to stand strong in the face of adversity. Nicely written
thank u.🌺
You are most welcome
The way uve descibed fate.... ✨✨✨ Its so beautifully expressed the panic that settle when the sacrifices go in vain 💔💔 the late night thinkings the questioning of everything that u did yet the outcome was not what should be ✨ ✨
Thoughts are vacant,heart is full
Nothing to imagine,nothing to feel
These two lines awesome litreally awesome ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
thnk u very much..means alot.❤️❤️
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