Words that cut too deep
Actions that burn within
A vow was made,
Yet betrayal is all I gained.
As time passed,
The pain you gave me
Erased the love I once held.
I won’t let these feelings turn into hate,
But disappointment is a weight I cannot shed
I trusted you,
And you deceived me.
All my aspirations,
My expectations,
My admiration,
My emotions-
Could not outlive the despair I felt.
You dimmed the light from my eyes
And snuffed the life from my heart.
Death did us apart
As hell became your path.
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Author:
Algendhir (
Offline) - Published: February 4th, 2026 02:21
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Comments1
Here death and hell symbolic and metaphoric represent the relationship itself when betrayal becomes an issue of trust that the relationship is built upon. Well written
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