I met a hammer
today, he
he wore scrubs,
a hair net, nose mask
and glasses. He
received our permission
to hit. He
hammered on
on And
and on
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Author:
Derek Onyia (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I went to the clinic with my girlfriend and met an interesting doctor that saw the whole world through his blue coloured glasses, everything was blue and we had fun exchanging
- Category: Short story
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Comments3
Nicely expressing violence made acceptable through procedure, language, and consent.
I appreciate your insight about my poem, thank you.
You are welcome.
A most interesting read to see everything in blue instead of rose says something of the mood. A poem of what we allow others to do.
I’m glad you found it so. Thank you for taking the time to express your thoughts
Most welcome
Great poem, what does the title mean?
Mammie is my girlfriend and it was her day off from work.
Thank you
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