Truly Unfair

RENZYY

Heavy on Duty

 

Unfair, Cruel, Insensitive and Selfish.

Every word, Every action, counts as if I should pay back in everything you do

It shouldn't be a duty

It shouldn't be a Fifty Fifty

An Inconvenience or another add on to your Responsibility

I feel like you kept me because you like someone being around

But not enough to make you feel like I'll always be around

Heavy on Duty is false, for the word alone makes me crash and fall.

 

  • Author: RENZYY (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 7th, 2026 09:31
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 24
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  • Friendship

    Well written. Your poem revolves around the emotional burden and dissatisfaction in a relationship characterized by a lack of genuine commitment and affection. The poet expresses feelings of being treated as a mere obligation rather than a valued partner

    • RENZYY

      Thank You! I try my best :>

      • Friendship

        Your welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        Such feelings themselves serve as a burden and can be heavy to carry Well written



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