Autopsy

Paul Bell

You gotta let the blood out the body

You gotta let it all fade away

Once the blood is out the body

Then the body can reawake

 

You gotta walk the streets at night

Watch the victims shining bright

Waiting for dreams that never come true

Clinging to life nearly through

 

You gotta let the blood out the body

You gotta let it all fade away

Once the blood is out the body

Then the body can reawake

 

You gotta watch their eyes

No hiding, no disguise

Vacant pools lacking soul

Destiny’s ashes burning coals

 

You gotta let the blood out the body

You gotta let it all fade away

Once the blood is out the body

Then the body can reawake

 

You gotta cut the body wide

Gotta cut it deep inside

See the pictures' life unfold

Death in jars, story told.

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  • Friendship

    Wow. Well written yet so dark. Your poem "Autopsy" explores themes of mortality, the fragility of life, and the cathartic process of confronting death and loss. The poet suggests that to rejuvenate or "reawaken," one must confront the painful aspects of existence, represented through the metaphor of blood leaving the body. Yet you leave a haunting imagery of life and its aftermath. The act of "letting the blood out" serves as a metaphor for emotional release and the necessity of facing the darker aspects of life.

    • Paul Bell

      They do say blood transfusions are good for you.

    • sorenbarrett

      Had a neighbor that was a mortician had a rather dark sense of humor. Let the blood out of the body is that were the idea of vampires came from? A rather morbid feel here. The Egyptians took the organs out, seems like a lot of lost effort to me. Jack the ripper did it with passion. I wonder who's work it was to put them back inside. A poem that holds the attention as if the body was being autopsied along with the poem. Very nicely done my friend

      • Paul Bell

        Always noticed people who dealt with death had a dark sense of humour.
        Mind you, probably need one to keep going.

        • sorenbarrett

          My sense of humor is dark enough as it is need a hebephrenic with silly uncontrollable laughter to balance out.

        • Paul Bell

          Death I suppose is the release, but maybe not the end.

        • Doggerel Dave

          "Fee fi fo fum, I smell the blood of an Englishman"

          • Paul Bell

            Never understood the blood drinking lot.
            I'm sure it's an excuse for not getting the beers in.

            • Doggerel Dave

              Also don't have regular sleeping hours....
              Working nightshift is bad for health.....

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Love it! That refrain about letting the blood out does heavy lifting here, Paul. It turns autopsy into ritual, not spectacle. The insistence sharpens the dread. Well done. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

            • Thomas W Case

              This reads like a bruised prayer, not a threat β€” pain as purging, survival as ritual.
              Dark, relentless, and honest about what it costs to keep breathing when hope won’t show up.



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