I remember
It was in December
Near the embers
I fell in love
In a state of panic
Inside, I was manic
This feeling, so tyrannical
I was hooked
As our eyes locked
I was so shocked
Completely knocked
So deep into you
As we parted
I was downhearted
It had just started
Yet we had to say goodbye
Wishing stronger
To linger
A little longer
In your mind that night.
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Algendhir (
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A wonderfully woven pattern of rhyme, rhythm, meter in this poem that carries a romantic message as well. It is charming in the way it unfolds and a fave
True love and the memories.of. eyes meeting,.lips softly kissing,.hands lost in feeling and a mind of a.lost sense of everything else except the other person. Lost ilike a beating heart of desire and want. These are the reactions of falling in love. Your poem was a really good 👍
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