DO NOT
Do not
Close my eyes
When I die.
Let my eyes
Kiss
The sky.
Two blues together,
Now with the horizon line,
Faded.
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Author:
Sami Mulaj (
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The poem is a wonderful expression of messages. Do not close my eyes when I die to me has different meanings (do not shut out the visions of this world) and (literal) also (do not take away my control) Let my eyes kiss the sky (such a poetic line) Two blues together ( A great line merging colors and existence) Now with the horizon line faded ( the blurring of life and death) Brilliant!! A fave
This message is more thoughtful. I like my poetry more now. Thank you!
Each poem deserves thought and this one begs for deliberation. You are most welcome it is my pleasure to read fine poems like this
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