your god may hate me
ha, but my god, oh my god!
I know I love you
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Comments4
Not at all where I thought you were going to go!! Brilliant!!
I appreciate you Kate
I question who would want to worship a god of hate. Good write Demar
those with hate in their hearts, unfortunately soren
So true
Nicely worded.
we're so back Friendship
Demar, this is compact but charged. The tension between condemnation and declaration resolves in a personal, unshakeable truth. That exclamation in the middle cracks the poem open before landing in certainty. Sharp, brave, and resonant. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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