Twin Flames

Mutley Ravishes

Sol,

I was told

You were an only child

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  • sorenbarrett

    I like this short. It can be taken humorously or philosophically. Nicely done Mutley

    • Mutley Ravishes

      I like the way I nearly always have to pause before replying to your comments, Soren. Bjork wrote a song called "Earth Intruders." I have recently come across the idea that Earth is an "intruder." I`ll leave it at that!

      • sorenbarrett

        There are always diverse ways to look at anything.

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Mutley, this is razor sharp. So few words, yet it opens something vast. That last line lands with quiet force…like a revelation slipping in sideways. It lingers. Powerful restraint here, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Mutley Ravishes

          The Daystar. Now, what might that be? Thanks for dropping by, Tristan!

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Most welcome, my friend.



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