The sax swims in, swims out,
like a snake uncoiling and then coiling back;
lead guitar's strident notes
command attention.
Bass draws repeated patterns,
like a child drawing circles in the sand;
drums cycle brooding,
punctured by the cheerful cymbals,
and return to brood again.
And
I sit, eyes closed,
in deathly stillness,
yet propelled
by that liquid momentum.
In the mind's eye
I see those fingers
press the keys,
pluck the strings,
play the chords,
sticks hit the drums.
They make me understand
life's motion,
like a blind man realising
light.
In the cobwebs
of my perceptions,
which I can feel
yet cannot really put in words,
I ask myself:
was this the language
I heard inside the womb?
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Author:
Rebellion In Sanity (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I love music. Its quite frustrating not be able to find words how it makes me feel. I feel the poem landed much short of its target, but this was the best I could do with my limited vocabulary. Your comments (good, bad or ugly) will be highly appreciated. Thank you
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