Blind Man's Light

rebellion_in_sanity

The sax swims in, swims out,
like a snake uncoiling and then coiling back;
lead guitar's strident notes
command attention.
Bass draws repeated patterns,
like a child drawing circles in the sand;
drums cycle brooding,
punctured by the cheerful cymbals,
and return to brood again.

 

And
I sit, eyes closed,
in deathly stillness,
yet propelled
by that liquid momentum.

 

In the mind's eye
I see those fingers
press the keys,
pluck the strings,
play the chords,
sticks hit the drums.

 

They make me understand
life's motion,
like a blind man realising
light.

 

In the cobwebs
of my perceptions,
which I can feel
yet cannot really put in words,
I ask myself:
was this the language
I heard inside the womb?

  • Author: Rebellion In Sanity (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 15th, 2026 08:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: I love music. Its quite frustrating not be able to find words how it makes me feel. I feel the poem landed much short of its target, but this was the best I could do with my limited vocabulary. Your comments (good, bad or ugly) will be highly appreciated. Thank you
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