Dimensions

gray0328

 

The bottle rolls off the table, heavy,  

three dimensions hold its hollow ache.  

The stars above seem like pinholes,  

but we name them, chain their fire.  

 

Cages built by minds with boundaries,  

walls of thought, brick by brick.  

Try to step higher into the ceiling,  

but everything falls into flat lines.  

 

The fourth is a whisper we won't hear,  

a shadow flickering against drunk walls.  

We claw for something past the void,  

but our hands grab nothing, just vapor.  

 

Three doors wide, we cannot walk past,  

our lives just circles drawn in dirt.  

What waits beyond has no angles,  

no form we’d recognize, or accept.

  • Author: gray0328 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 15th, 2026 10:53
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  • sorenbarrett

    Deeply philosophical this poem speaks of three dimensions when we know there are more. I am working on a poem closely related, not sure if I will have it ready tomorrow but within a couple of days. Good write my friend

    • gray0328

      Thanks Soren I'm looking forward to your poem

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Gray



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