Comanche Moon

Kurt Philip Behm

I remember

mission children

before

the devils came

 

I remember

music and laughter

before

that night of flames

 

I remember

a priest who pleaded

before

they took his hair

 

I remember

a maiden girl

before

her screams despaired

 

I remember

a wind that blew

before

the Hades storm

 

And I remember

a moon that cried

before

 that blood-soaked morn

 

(Dreamsleep: February, 2026)

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  • Thomas W Case

    fANASTIC

  • sorenbarrett

    Most dramatic, poetic and moving. A wonderful write Kurt and a fave

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Kurt, this is devastating in its restraint. The repetition of “I remember” builds like a tolling bell. It doesn’t dramatize…it simply bears witness. “Before / that blood-soaked morn” lands with heavy finality. This sits in the chest. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • Kurt Philip Behm

      Mission accomplished, thanks. Mid-Nineteenth Century Texas was a dangerous place.

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Most welcome, Kurt. Indeed, it was. No doubt about that.



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