The brown bear that stalks down the paths in the forest.
Paws pressing down onto the ground below,
leaving behind a sign for others.
It trots down the muddy walk,
thinking to itself,
however only silence rang.
A continuous sound, ringing out softly,
it's focus on walking,
however never talking.
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Author:
atticus_made (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I just wanted to work with a rather abstract prompt for once
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Comments3
Silence has its virtues and just because we don't know what or even if something is thinking does not mean that there are not thoughts there. Those signs it leaves without words are the clues. Nicely worded
Silence has the loudest impact. Your poem reflects that in the most simple way. A personal fav.
Beware the bear that walks with care, he'll sneak up behind you like you're not there.
Something cute about bears.
Yes! I was looking through prompts and one about a bear caught my eye, I will admit I was inspired by your poetry as well.
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