and from the mouths of babes,
I wished you death..,
because i was an inocent child.
i never knew how strong i was
and when you came to show me ..,
you never left me from that point on .
im not sure if i should thank you
or hate you ?
Alas your still here
as you always have been
since that moment we became one.
Please dont let us die !
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Author:
D.W.Hopkins (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this is a poem or an actual moment of my life that took place as i was only 12 years old not yet tainted by the realities of Gods Beauty..., i still dont know wether i was cursed or blessed the moment that man died...i want to live to be older than 60.
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Comments2
This poem states a specific fear and there is a plea for help. Quite understandable from a child and well written.
It still is a very scary issue for me today,
Since that day, I've for some reason always known that i would die at 57 years old
Frightening
I liked the depth...
Thank you very kindly.
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