right now! currently!
sorry, if it's personal
I hope you're not shy
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I need bank statements, W2s and recent transactions! just kidding
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 17
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, jjudaharts
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Comments2
Another write Demar that sets one's mind to working well done
Demar, this works because of its tone shift. Bold demand…quick apology…then that sly “I hope you’re not shy.” It feels like social commentary hiding inside a flirt. Minimal, but pointed. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
hahahahha nahhh Tristan I think you're reading me way to well hahaha literally right on the mark
LOL! Rock on, bro!
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