i saw a little lovebird sat up in a tree sitting on the branches looking down at me then he sang a song a lovely melody made feel so happy and filled my heart with glee he had lots of colors there were quite a few yellow red and green and a lovely shade of blue singing there so sweetly his little song of love singing it to me in the branches up a above.. he sat there while as happy as can be then he flew away and waved goodbye to me i still here his song as i lay in bed his lovely melody is still there in my head.
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jim56 (
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In this poem you have changed your pattern not so much in topic but in wording where in your format there comes internal rhymes not just end rhymes. Good for you Jim exploring the new is always wonderful. Well done
hi thanks for always lovely comments
means a lot jim
Most welcome Jim
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