The Fox, the Lion, and the River’s Mirror

Efrain Cajar

I
In a valley wrapped in silver mist and pine
There ruled an aging lion crowned with flame;
His roar once split the hills in ancient time,
Now memory upheld his fragile name.
No longer swift in claw nor fierce in chase,
He governed by the echo of his might;
The forest watched the slackening of his pace
And whispered doubts beneath the cloak of night.

II
A fox with amber eyes and careful tread
Observed the weakening beneath the crown;
She measured every silence that he spread
And felt the shifting weight of power fall down.
“No throne,” she thought, “is fastened to the bone;
No king is guarded from the tooth of age.
If rivers move and stones are overthrown,
Why should a forest honor an old page?”

III
She spoke to deer, to wolves, to trembling hare,
She stirred the wind with arguments refined;
“The forest needs a pulse that still can dare,
Not stories worn and legends left behind.
Is strength preserved in titles long declared?
Is rule sustained by yesterday’s acclaim?
When water stagnates, rot is soon prepared—
So kingdoms rot when only ruled by name.”

IV
The murmurs thickened like approaching rain;
The owl kept watch but did not yet descend;
The tortoise listened, slow in thought and brain,
While rumor spread from root to outer bend.
At last the lion heard the rising thread
Of doubt that coiled like smoke around his throne;
His mane still burned, but something in him said
The forest’s faith was no longer his own.

V
“Who questions me?” he thundered from the height,
His voice still capable of shaking stone.
The fox stepped forward, polished, calm, and bright:
“Great king, we seek no insult to your throne.
Yet look into the river at midday,
When sun leaves nothing softened or concealed;
Let water judge what memory cannot sway,
And truth reflect what time has half-revealed.”

VI
He walked toward the river in blazing noon,
The forest trailing silent in his wake;
The sun stood still, an unforgiving rune,
No shadow left for pride or doubt to fake.
He saw within the mirror of the stream
A lion not of thunder, but of years;
A fading fire where once had burned a dream,
A sovereign tempered now by hidden fears.

VII
The fox leaned close with honeyed gravity:
“No shame in yielding when the season turns;
The forest honors noble dignity
When wisdom yields before ambition burns.
Step down by choice and legend shall remain;
Resist, and murmurs sharpen into knives.”
Her words were silk, but woven through with gain—
Ambition glinted quietly in her eyes.

VIII
The lion saw not only age’s trace,
But hunger flickering behind her tone;
This was not justice seeking rightful place,
But appetite disguised in virtue’s tone.
“If I surrender out of wounded pride,
I crown deception dressed in moral art;
If I refuse and cling to strength denied,
I tear the forest further apart.”

IX
The owl descended, wings of tempered gray,
And spoke with voice like distant mountain rain:
“Not every change restores a wiser day,
Nor every youth is free of selfish gain.
Power without conscience rots from within;
Cleverness without truth corrodes the core.
Let leadership be tested not by spin,
But by what it is willing to endure.”

X
Silence stretched between the trees and sky;
The fox lowered her gaze, but not her will.
The lion lifted tired head on high,
And felt the restless valley growing still.
“I rule,” he said, “while strength and judgment meet;
When either fails, I yield without disgrace.
But I will not step down for cunning speech,
Nor trade the crown for appetite’s embrace.”

XI
The moons turned slowly over root and stone;
The forest learned to measure voice from truth.
The fox’s silver rhetoric was shown
To mask a sharper hunger for uncouth rule.
The lion ruled with tempered, listening mind,
No longer roaring merely to command;
And balance grew where doubt had once entwined
Its restless vines around the woodland land.

XII
So learn, O forest heart and human throne:
Not every whisper heralds rightful change;
Nor every elder must be overthrown
Because the young grow restless at the range.
A ruler’s worth is proven not by claim,
Nor by ambition polished smooth and bright;
But by the will to serve beyond mere name,
And guard the common good with measured might.

  • Author: Efrain Cajar (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 25th, 2026 00:07
  • Category: Fable
  • Views: 9
  • Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments2

  • sorenbarrett

    Nicely constructed with great rhyme and meter this poem has as well a great message all set forth in twelve stanza form. Its images carry one's interest along with the story and it paints a fable. Well done and a fave

    • Efrain Cajar

      Thank you very much, I was hesitating to publish it because poetic fables are seen less and less and it seemed like a big risk to me, but it wouldn't be me if I didn't take the risk.

      • sorenbarrett

        You are welcome. I love poetic fables and don't worry about what others are doing although there is no such thing as original, witting your way is what make you, you. I would love to be known for being different. What matters is if others read what you do. I am glad you took the risk.

      • Doggerel Dave

        I confess I'm not a fan of longform poetry as my concentration levels could be better. However your pieces here do tend to draw me in, and this piece is no exception. Great form and rhyme propels the story forward to a satisfying conclusion.

        • Efrain Cajar

          The objective is for us to read more, otherwise we are left with poetry that is much shorter than Haikus.

          • Doggerel Dave

            Can't argue with that..... though there could be a middle ground.... keep them interesting.

            • Efrain Cajar

              Maybe in the future with humorous poems.
              But I´m more of creating between ten to twelve stanzas.

              • Doggerel Dave

                I'm ancient and tired - don't push too hard.... But then I'm only one member of your audience...go whichever way feels right for you, I feel.

                • Efrain Cajar

                  Your presence matters more than you think. I won’t push — I’ll let the rhythm unfold naturally. Thank you for being part of the audience.
                  Remember You are premium edition.

                  • Doggerel Dave

                    I'll try......😂



                  To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.