We’ll trust you with open eyes,
and care to share.
In our [...] you will be one of us,
so lend us your trust.
[...]
join us and this too can be your future.
Our future together, don't be skittish, come to the [...]
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Author:
atticus_made (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wanted to make it seem similar to older texts, with the [...] parts that are always added.\r\nEspecially since I have been reading through so many during History lessons, I hope it came across correctly.
- Category: Religion
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Comments4
To trust with eyes open is the key for me. Do not walk blind into a relationship of trust always keep eyes open even after many years. Sleep only brings dreams. Nicely done
Can we trust an open invitation?
exactly! One must always think that there is a catch
There's plenty of hooks out, but only one fisher of men.
An interesting write to read, I think you can only build trust if all eyes are open, walkly blindly only leads to failure and disappointment, enjoyed the read
I really like the writing style and the flow of the poem. Really takes you back to older writing. A fav
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