Expectation: Elation!
God's recreation...
To nurture, nourish-
Watch: blossom and bloom-
See all the turns-
Forks in the road..
Smashing, crashing-
Heavy the load..
Moulded into full submission:
Time now for the great commission...
Life abundant
Full provision
For all sojourners on the earth
Before life, must come rebirth.
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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Comments2
The last two lines seal this poem. Well told and nicely worded it speaks out.
Valiantstar, this reads like a condensed testimony arc…creation, hardship, shaping, mission, abundance. The clipped phrasing gives it a proclamatory tone, and the closing “Before life, must come rebirth” frames renewal as prerequisite, not afterthought. A succinct and purposeful piece, and a fave for sure. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
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