i has been getting
In the way
Of spontane-
-ity
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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- Comment from author about the poem: There are no grammatical or capitalization mistakes in this rhyme.
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- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments2
I like your author's comment and the implication. This may be taken several ways with the i being a diminished look at one's self and how this impedes spontaneity or the i being the letter itself and how its usage and need in composing, being one of the more popular vowels impedes composing. I would guess the first. Nicely done
You guessed right! Thanks for reading and commenting, Soren.
You are most welcome
Mutley, this is deceptively simple…that fractured “spontaneity” visually becoming the blockage is clever and precise. The lowercase “i” sitting in the way says more than a full stanza could. Minimal, intentional, and effective. Next level right back atcha, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Haha! Thanks for the read and comment, Tristan.
Most welcome, Mutley!
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