a clever trick
for O so thick
turning humility into weakness
but have no doubt
if the lion gets out
he will tear you to pieces.
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Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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Comments5
Clever wording and nicely written. Loved it
Thanks Soren,
It's a mind game...
You are welcome
A mind game? If the mind is part of the brain, or in the brain, It's no use to me with only my 3 brain cells! lol.
Orchi, it's all that humility that's done it...
Valiantstar, this bites… short, sharp, and confident. The warning lands clean without overexplaining itself. There’s restraint in the delivery, which makes the final image hit harder. Powerfuly, my friend. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
A carefully written warning, short and sharp that delivers the message, so there is no confusion, enjoyed the read.
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