White flakes start to fall,
My secret melts on my tongue,
I love you, I say.
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Author:
Lilmoonxx (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I didn't want to write a long, complicated story. Sometimes 'I love you' is the only thing that actually matters when the temperature becomes colder. I just wanted to capture that one second where the winter finally started feeling a lot warmer with that particular person.
- Category: Love
- Views: 12
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Comments3
I like the idea of a secret melting on a tongue. Very visceral and most metaphorical as well. Lovely
incredible haiku... 10/10
short and simple, I like it
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