Notice of absence from Caring dove
Your affecting how I feel you should probably try getting help
Your affecting how I feel you should probably try getting help
A tree softly stands
feet connected
arms open to the singing spring sky
little leaves lightly being with those branches that are soft steady and strong
below the blue sky
that’s living like a calm ocean
without the waves saying a hello
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
Online) - Published: March 2nd, 2026 12:09
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Comments4
A fine write D. There's tall, strong, older trees too, we know.
Thankyou ))
Caring Dove, this feels peaceful from the first line…unrushed and gentle. The image of the tree with arms open carries quiet welcome. It settles into stillness by the end. “without the waves saying a hello” leaves it calm and contemplative. Powerful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thankyou )) appreciate your kind words .. thanks 🙂
The welcoming of nature expressed in this poem. Nicely written
Thankyou ))
You are most welcome
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