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A tree softly stands
feet connected
arms open to the singing spring sky
little leaves lightly being with those branches that are soft steady and strong
below the blue sky
that’s living like a calm ocean
without the waves saying a hello
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Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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A fine write D. There's tall, strong, older trees too, we know.
Thankyou ))
Caring Dove, this feels peaceful from the first line…unrushed and gentle. The image of the tree with arms open carries quiet welcome. It settles into stillness by the end. “without the waves saying a hello” leaves it calm and contemplative. Powerful poem. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thankyou )) appreciate your kind words .. thanks 🙂
Most welcome, my friend.
The welcoming of nature expressed in this poem. Nicely written
Thankyou ))
You are most welcome
lovely
Thankyou )))
That is a very calming, soothing and peaceful write, the tree's branches like welcoming arms, lovely write, enjoyed the read
Thankyou very much )) glad you enjoyed my poem
You are very welcome
a very soothing write ...yes the tree is definitely well connected to the earth and yet open to welcome th sun's rays on its tender leaves
Thankyou very much glad you enjoyed my writing about the tree )
yes i did - thanks for sharing ...
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