am I poisoned?

Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

am I infected?
people's insincerity
it's gotten to me 

 

  • Author: Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 3rd, 2026 21:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: Third poem of the day, I've been having a tough time. Maybe its cause I stopped drinking. Either way I think I'll end today with this poem...
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 40
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, jjudaharts
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  • Allie561

    I hope some of us can pose as a remedy Demar. I seem to notice the lack of consideration for others in daily life as I’ve gotten multiple doors shut in my face, whether at a store or into work. It’s not too big of a deal but I miss when people would take time to help each other out. Wishing you the best, may these hard times be over soon.

    • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

      Feels like there’s balance… there are sweethearts and then there’s assholes… c'est la vie

      • Allie561

        That’s very true

      • 2781

        F'k Off! (That's my insincerity)

        • Lorenz

          Don't be so rude with a poor disabled !

          • 2781

            He should know he's loved...

          • sorenbarrett

            Is it the insincerity that got to you or the infection? Most interesting and causing one to think

            • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

              The infection of insincerity… it feels like that’s what got to me. I feel so pissed off these days

              • sorenbarrett

                And so are many others

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                I hear you. Me too, my own included! Well done, my friend.

              • Syd

                Very relatable. Especially the drinking. I've had trouble in the past but thankfully all that's behind me now.

                - Syd

              • NafisaSB

                high time to stop this sort of feeling before it overtakes you completely - but yes, people's insincerity gets me frustrated and annoyed too..good haiku..

                • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

                  You’re right… I want to be a cure! I guess being honest and righteous probably annoys the ones that aren’t Lol… we must continue

                  • NafisaSB

                    gm..never give upeven if it annoys the hypocrites - that's my viewpoint too
                    stay honest and upright - God bless you

                    • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

                      Good morning… thank you Nafisa, God bless you as well.



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