There is a quiet javelin in flight,
Brisk, between earth and earth,
Plummets forth without sight,
Paragon, between death and birth,
Slices of air made for the soil,
Brushes of velvet and thread,
Soaring eagle-like, effortless toil,
We watch and are dissolved.
Filtered we stand, as if the fog,
Had entered the real world,
And transformed our hand,
To still be with the wonder held,
Try, if you will, if you dare,
Unfasten the peace that lies within,
Set it free to kiss the air,
Be unto thyself a Javelin.
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Author:
David Wakeling (
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This one seems rather enigmatic but I take it to be toward peace and our choice to enact it. Very poetically written in metaphor
Yes your right I think it needs work.Thanks for commenting compadre
You are most welcome my friend
Nicely done, your poem deals with the journey of self-discovery and the inner struggle to break free from constraints
Yes like flying over the walls.Thanks for your insight
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