I love you....YOU! yes you!

Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

love really connects 

and although I do not know 

I still trust and hope... 

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  • sorenbarrett

    It is good to trust in something

  • Allie561

    We find many connections through love, whether it’s a shared interest or someone you admire. I keep hoping and trying to trust in love, great poem Demar.

    • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

      My heart has been broken recently… my relationship with society feels like it’s collapsing… I’m so tired A. It’s easy to write poems like this because my poems are my dreams, but when I’m awake it’s quiet the opposite… I wonder if it’s my ying yang

      • Allie561

        I’m very sorry to hear that Demar, I think most of us seem to be crumbling. Maybe drinking more tea will help you stay awake haha? I hope good things come your way soon, keep writing.

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Bro, if more human beings had your inquisitive sensitivity, would their be wars in this world? Surely a lot less, if any ever. Powerful concise poem that actually wowed me. And your's continually do that. Well done, my friend. For what it is worth (a lot, I think) I love you too! I mean that. ❤️ 🌈🖤🙏🪨

        • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

          Gosh if more people was as sensitive as me we’d probably have ghosts towns everywhere or cry babies. Still as I get older I feel like I am getting more sensitive and more compassionate and more loving… it feels like a gift. Speaking of gifts, thank you as always for your support and comments. Appreciate your love bro 🤟🏽🫡❤️‍🩹

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            I believe that to be a gift indeed, because not everyone finds themselves there! Glad you and I both do! You are welcome, my friend. You are a gift as well, to the community and me. Rock on!



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