When the dense fog rises
Our sun ascends
It is day
Sun is reluctant
Moving into position
As if stalling
Lighting up a world
That falls short
Sun delivers and is eminent
Magnificent, underrated
A blister in the sky
Sustainer of life
Near dusk our sun is disposed of
Drowning in the sea
Sun and moon transpose
Moon stands guard
As if hollow and whispered
Suspended from grace
Alleys and paths lurk
In what lies dim
Moonlight is for lovers
Cats on the prowl
The moon works the
Late Shirt
Parting at dews
Imposition
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Author:
Katie B. (
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- Category: Nature
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A beautiful picture of nature in the movement of moon and sun. It is most poetic Katie
Thank you for reading my work and for your generous comments.
You are most welcome Katie
Katie, I like how this poem moves through the cycle of day and night as if two quiet guardians trade places. The reluctant sun and watchful moon create a subtle narrative of transition. The closing images of moonlit alleys and prowling cats give the night its own personality. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you for your generous comments, always appreciated!!
Most welcome, Katie!
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