Lonely Isle Files

Mutley Ravishes

Hah!-Kuin

Jumped in

To the midst

Of our Idle Talk on a Night Boat

Clutching an Elven rope

He roared

"Between one who is ruled

By the passions

And one who isn`t 

What`s the difference?"

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  • Katie B.

    Clever write~

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    Mutley, what a scene...almost like it's out of some strange midnight parable…a sudden arrival, an odd image with the rope, and then that blunt question dropped into the middle of it all. The moment feels both humorous and philosophical at the same time. It’s brief but it lingers. Nicely crafted, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thanks a million, Tristan. The flow in this rhyme still needs work...

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        You are most welcome, Mutley. 😊

      • sorenbarrett

        Most fanciful and I would not know the difference. great rhyme and write

        • Mutley Ravishes

          I owe it all to Hakuin
          And Tolkien!

          Thanks a million, Soren.

          • sorenbarrett

            You are most welcome

          • RSM0812

            An interesting write. Passionate people are more high energy and maybe a bit controlling. Where unpassionate people may sometimes just ride the wave they are on.

            • Mutley Ravishes

              Thanks for dropping by. Riding the wave without losing your balance or being drowned by it is the way to go, I guess?!



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