Notice of absence from lilmoonxx
Hii!! I will be offline for about 2 weeks. Trying to manage everything is a bit overwhelming. I should be back on time.
Hii!! I will be offline for about 2 weeks. Trying to manage everything is a bit overwhelming. I should be back on time.
The dust motes dance in a golden line,
crossing the floor while the clock takes its time.
The world outside is loud and fast,
but in this square of light, I’ll make it last.
No deadlines, no drama, no static in my head-
just the warmth of the sun on the edge of my bed.
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Author:
Lilmoonxx (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 17th, 2026 05:51
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments2
Beautiful a splendid example of how the most simple can be made poetic and lovely. Loved it
You write very enigmatic poetry I like a lot.
I'm sure you have more to say - could we not hear from you in responses to commentary on your own work?
I always wanted to say more about my poems but i'm not quite sure exactly what to say. I like to let others interpret my work the way they want to.
That's no way to communicate with the world. Language is there to make yourself clear to others, not confuse them.😊
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