I left him a note
He never knew what I wrote
It sat among the flowers
Untouched for many hours
I wish he could read it
But he lay in a dark pit
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Cheesencrackers (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
Is that dark pit a grave? Nicely written
Indeed it is Soren, glad you could piece it together. Thanks for reading.
You are most welcome
Allie, this is quietly heartbreaking…there’s something about how simple it is that makes it land even harder. That feeling of something left unsaid just lingers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you Tristan for your insight. I’m glad that I could convey that emotion although it’s a shorter poem.
Nicely framed and described in just few lines!!
Thank you for the read and comment!
that is so sad - and so well described in such few words
Thank you for leaving feedback, I’m glad that the heaviness had an effect on you.
you are welcome - and hope the veil of gloom and heaviness lifts soonest
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