Nine on the Field

Matthew R. Callies

The whistle blows, the ball rolls free,

Players dart across the grassy ground.

Nine-a-side, a smaller team to see,

Every pass and tackle tightly bound.

 

Players dart across the grassy ground,

Feet fly fast, the chase is on.

Every pass and tackle tightly bound,

A sprint, a dodge, the lead is gone.

 

Feet fly fast, the chase is on,

The ball arcs high beneath the sun.

A sprint, a dodge, the lead is gone,

The crowd cheers loud for every run.

 

The ball arcs high beneath the sun,

Nine-a-side, a smaller team to see.

The crowd cheers loud for every run,

The whistle blows, the ball rolls free.

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  • sorenbarrett

    A great poem packed with action verbs full of images all set to sport and fun. Nicely worded

  • Doggerel Dave

    Action! You caught it. Never heard of this game before; where is it played?
    You are using a form, not quite a villanelle. Has it a name?

    • Matthew R. Callies

      Nine-a-side footy appears to be played mostly in in the UK and other parts of Europe. The form is called a pantoum - a traditional Malay/Indonesian style

      • Doggerel Dave

        Thanks for that. (I'm still keeping an eye on you👍)

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Matthew, this is fun and energetic…there’s a real sense of motion here that keeps everything moving from start to finish. It feels like the game never stops. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛



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