End the wars

NafisaSB

Sightless eyes

Piteous sighs

Soundless screams

Scary dreams     

Is this the future

Sad and bleak

That we humans

For fellow beings seek?

Wounds have left

Indelible scars

Isn’t it high time

We end the wars ?

 

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    We are social creatures for this there are wars not just murders. It is most sad that some are perpetrators and others are victims. Well written

    • NafisaSB

      the perpetrators are smaller in number than the victims and yet spread indescribable terror , havoc and misery...that's the pity

      • sorenbarrett

        There are always a few that spoil it for the many

        • NafisaSB

          yes indeed...

        • Lorenz

          War is one of those things necessary for evolution .

          • NafisaSB

            is sit really? i wonder

          • Doggerel Dave

            A beautifully simple question, requiring the equally simple answer - yes! But how?

            (I admire you for putting it out there so starkly. Thanks.)

            • NafisaSB

              i feel strongly about it, and feel so helpless too..
              thanks for the feedback - have a beautiful weekend - take care

              • NafisaSB

                i feel strongly about it, and feel so helpless too..
                thanks for the feedback - have a beautiful weekend - take care

                • Doggerel Dave

                  Yes - will.. should be great... You too.

                  • Doggerel Dave

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    Safina, this carries a strong, urgent message…images like “sightless eyes” and “soundless screams” set the tone, and the question you ask cuts right to it. It feels like both a warning and a plea for change. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                    • NafisaSB

                      thanks for understanding the underlying message..
                      have a great weekend

                      • NafisaSB

                        thanks for understanding the underlying message..
                        have a great weekend

                      • Thomas W Case

                        Superb work. Excellent.

                        • NafisaSB

                          thanks - glad it resonated with you

                        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                          Its long been high time that civilizations build technology that prevents wars instead of killing for oil/ land/ money with pretexts.
                          A great ti the point needed poem!! Kudos!
                          Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

                          • NafisaSB

                            i agree with your sentiments...thanks for stopping by

                          • Neville


                            I share that dream so much it hurts .. I'm with you all the way and got your back covered .. Neville

                            • NafisaSB

                              thank you, and God bless you - may our prayers reach the Lord, and normalcy is restored...

                            • Thomas W Case

                              Blind eyes and quiet screams—this is what we leave behind when we forget how to be human.
                              Feels like we’ve known better all along, just never had the nerve to stop.

                              • NafisaSB

                                The callousness and indifference never fails to amaze me. How they remain unmoved by unfolding tragedies is beyond my comprehension

                              • uglykavi

                                Well written. Thank you for sharing.

                                • NafisaSB

                                  thanks for understanding and your empathy



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