Some minds shut like rusted jail doors,
locked tight, fearing the wind’s chatter.
They turn inward, chasing echoes
that bounce off cold, hard walls.
The open ones, though—
those are the parachutes,
billowing in the freefall,
catching gusts from a screaming sky.
You can’t stitch courage
into the fabric of the closed.
They’d rather plummet clean and fast,
daring gravity to prove its worth.
But the open—
they tumble through questions,
ride the howling winds of doubt,
and land in fields of strange colors.
The fall is the same for everyone.
The difference
is who bothers
to pull the ripcord.
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Comments1
Now this is a metaphor that had never occurred to me Gray. Well developed and worked out if floats. Nicely done
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