The sun on my back feels like bliss
When the clouds cover it’ll be something to miss
I like the blades of grass between my feet
It reminds me of a fresh bedsheet
And the breeze feels so nice
It adds the perfect amount of spice
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Author:
Cheesencrackers (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I’m tired of having bad weather but I had a good day today.
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Beautiful use of images and nature to create a feeling of refreshing energy. Well written
Thank you Soren for your comment.
Spring is sprung.... but if it is anything like where I live that day was spring (in my case autumn) and you've had it...
Did get the feeling though.
Now you can get a little taste of it before it happens!
All I get here is one clear autumn day and then more downpours.
I remember once I got snow in April. It was a big shock to most of us because it had started to get really hot!
Who or even what can you trust?
I think we’ll still have to find the answer to that lol
Allie, this feels warm right away…simple, light, and just full of presence. It doesn’t try too hard…it just lets the moment breathe. That ease really comes through. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you Tristan, I tried my hardest to replicate it.
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