R&R: mighty fine:)
Now a riddle inside a rhyme?
A subtle voice amongst the flowers; a merchant selling fruit'
Gullible ones; known as gods; demonised with untruths.
Is the story simple, for children up to youth?
Or does it make other claims, with a burden on the proof?
'It only took one bite to let the devils in:*
Which turned into a feeding frenzy!
People gorging on sin.
'That's why he explained it like he did:) it's a Father son relationship: man; he loves his kids...
It's all time and chance to those:
Who can say?
His R&R:)
He has made a way.
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Metaphor in a religious riddle that is as amusing as the answer. A fun read that teases the mind
Thanks again,
It's a targeted audience!
You are most welcome
My friend, this feels like wrestling with belief and meaning…asking questions while still holding onto something at the center. I’ve sat in that space before...where certainty and curiosity meet. Well done in capturing it. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Good write 2.
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