whisper

A Dying Hero of the Past


Notice of absence from A Dying Hero of the Past
if im not on,I'm probably on vacation....or at my best friends house.or playing with my cats

please

whisper

and tell me

I want to know

who it is you're dreaming of

because I,am truly

dreaming

of ...

you

 

  • Author: Tokitou (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 23rd, 2026 20:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: this is my diamond poem....
  • Category: Friendship
  • Views: 8
  • Users favorite of this poem: A Dying Hero of the Past
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  • sorenbarrett

    Romance come first to mind although this poem is listed under friendship. It seems the thought of a person in passion, young love. Love the format that is artfully crafted into a diamond, another romantic element. Very nicely done

    • A Dying Hero of the Past

      thanks soren right now i actually have a big crush on someone who is just my friend at the moment so it sorta suits me you know? lol >_

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome everything changes when friendships turn into relationships

        • A Dying Hero of the Past

          I hope it happenes : )

          • sorenbarrett

            Good luck



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