Notice of absence from DeadRose
Time travelling. Will be around sporadically.
Time travelling. Will be around sporadically.
entered 2 contests. results:
1 golden college admit - life set-
lost the one for poetry.
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Author:
-DR (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 25th, 2026 07:10
- Comment from author about the poem: yeah, might have gotten an undergrad research position as well, but I really wanted to win that small contest....
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
- In collections: Haiku.
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Comments1
Congratulations you wone the one that counts. Don't bet on the poetry as a loss. Keep it up. I loved the cleverness of this Senryu how you stayed in the boundaries by excluding the marginal comments and the cynical last line reporting that you lost the poetry contest and adding one syllable too many to the last line it fit so well. Magnificent!! Keep it up a fave
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