Spice Arrakian
The jaws of temptation
Insatiably hunger
For your sweet power
Desert aridness
Is all that`s left
Once they`ve taken you down
Into the depths
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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This brings the image to mind of Dune or even Star Wars but still its meaning lies deeper. Nicely written
I love the work of Frank Herbert (and not just the Dune series). Herbert said, indirectly, that Star Wars "borrowed" a lot of his ideas. I like Star Wars too!
Mutley, this carries a quiet brutality…a hunger that takes and takes until only emptiness remains. The descent feels inevitable, and the aftermath feels stripped bare. There’s a real weight to that kind of loss. Powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
You got it in a nutshell! The Spice has a value beyond words. How difficult it is to retain it whilst one is still in a separated state of belief!
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