I gave him my heart,
He gave his to someone else,
So now she has two,
And I am called heartless.
I gave him a heart that was whole,
And he gave it back to me,
But it looks a bit different now,
It seems to be filled with holes.
He took pieces of my heart,
To mend where his were missing,
Now his heart is healthy and whole,
I am called the broken soul.
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Author:
Ladywithaquill (
Offline) - Published: March 27th, 2026 08:52
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
A wonderful metaphor of a broken heart and how trust in another results in injury but the giving of love should never be a present with the expectation of a return. It it is it is an exchange or barter not a gift. Well written so nicely composed. Loved it
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
You are most welcome
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