How can i explain?
How can i make you understand?
That pain is all I feel,
Even when you see me grin
I Don't want you to feel sorry, to feel pity
It's not your fault, it's really just me
My mind is a hell that i wish to no one
Don't act surprised the Morning i am gone
You could've know if you just looked
But to make me stay you'd need a hook
I know i dramatize
I won't go for a while
But if one day you notice
If one day you notice the scars beneath my sleeves
If one day you notice the dirt beneath my heels
If one day you really notice me and my tears
Maybe you'll understand that pain is all I feel
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Author:
Jade (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: okay so this is my very first poem, idk anything about it and english is not even my first language but idk, i guess i just wanted to share this with someone, someone that doesn't know me
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
Well written. Your poem revolves around mental health, loneliness, and the longing for connection. The poet expresses a sense of isolation and the difficulty in conveying their emotional state to those around them, while also hinting at the idea that true understanding requires deeper observation. Welcome Jade
For a first poem in a language that is not your first language I would say you did very well. There is rawness in it and in that feeling you express the pain well. Keep up the good work and welcome to the site and to poetry
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