what is satisfaction?

Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

the richest finger 

continues to pull more strings 

when is it enough? 

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  • Mutley Ravishes

    Never enough! And who would want to be sentenced to that kind of a life? Not that I haven`t wrestled with insatiable hungers myself.

    • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

      Eh to me I see it as you have the ability to write poems, I have the ability to write poems and yet we both take the time to read each others. Understanding the give and take of life truly leads to things just being enough

      • Mutley Ravishes

        Well said, Demar. Keep the rhymes coming.

      • sorenbarrett

        This senryu is a commentary on avarice and greed in society. Nicely done Demar

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Yeah. This tracks and hits exactly as it should. Bravo! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

      • Allie561

        Sadly we’re always left wanting more, hard to have self control. Nice poem Demar.

        • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

          Interesting times we are in Allie… I might get to a point where I’m living in the mountains with nothing at all… okay maybe some boxers and a book…

          • Allie561

            That sounds like paradise, maybe I’ll find my way out in the wilderness too.

          • Friendship

            Well said.



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