are
habitable
They
democracy
a
planet.
and
of
ending
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Author:
Vipassana (
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are
habitable
They
democracy
a
planet.
and
of
ending
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Comments2
I’m curious to why you put a period on planet?
It shore is a puzzlement. I mean once a sentence and such has a
rearrangin' well I don’t rightly know how a man puts such and such
together again—it’s like humpty dumpty or some kinda
Picasso-like cubistic thing I seen in magazine one time.
Hmm art for art sake… great poem nonetheless
This one seems posed as a puzzle of humanity and as I see it a commentary on humanity and our ability or rather inability to govern ourselves. Well done
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