Soft Hosanna!

Poeticdiplo

 

It is Palm Sunday.

My heart, broken and sore,

cries softly: Hosanna, Lord.

 

In the folds of life-endings,

the untidy mess of rejection,

and the throes of new beginnings—

stuttering and shaky—

my Hosanna is soft.

 

Unlike the noise of the throngs,

I throw no garments for His donkey.

I simply lay my pieces down

for the One who can put them back.

 

For the Mender who rides a colt,

for the Healer who knows this loss,

for the Keeper and the Lifter,

I lay them all down.

 

I scan them as if they are not my own

and softly cry into the deep:

Hosanna, Lord.

  • Author: Poeticdiplo (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 1st, 2026 13:26
  • Comment from author about the poem: Note to the reader: Hosanna is a deeply felt cry meaning LORD save us! In modern church culture it’s been erroneously translated into a shout of praise, the throngs who cried it as recorded in the Bible were looking to Jesus for salvation from Roman occupation.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 8
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

Receive the ebook in seconds 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments2

  • sorenbarrett

    A metaphoric poetic religious expression most appropriate for the time of the year. Well written

  • orchidee

    Good write P.



To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.