Move towards intimacy with unity.
Intelligent design, dissolution.
Chanting our own melody
upon the void, dimension.
Revealed consciousness.
Inner gift, sensitive dance.
Continuity in stillness.
Ordered chaos, the fragrance.
Transience of the moment.
Enlightenment.
So ham.
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What does so ham mean? I like this poem either way
So ham" is a Sanskrit mantra meaning "I am That" or "I am one with everything." It’s often used in meditation and connected to breathing.
Thank you for your feedback!
Thank you for educating me
Nice poem .simple and highly spiritual .
Thank you, Lorenz.
Loved the opposite parring in this poem it seemed almost Taoist. Lovely
Thank you so much! You captured the essence perfectly.
You are most welcome
The simplicity gives the poem a gentle spiritual atmosphere. It feels calm and thoughtfully composed.
Thank you for your kind feedback!
Sharp, teasing, and cerebral—your words slice through the void with sly intimacy.
Grit under the gloss
Thank you for this perceptive comment!
To each their own method though - ordered chaos- seems a good idea 👍
I like that idea too. Ordered chaos can feel surprisingly natural. Thank you for reading!
agree with you here..
have a beautiful day.
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