Take it down a notch [Haiku 9]

DeadRose


Notice of absence from DeadRose
Time travelling. Will be around sporadically.
(check out my collections if you want a quick look at my poems)

ey, ego, sit the backseat

dont go saying "I deserved better,"

Kay? I, with life? satisfied.

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  • Allie561

    What a wonderful write, grateful to have life.

    • DeadRose

      Thank you, and it is a great gift.

      • Allie561

        You’re welcome!

      • Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏

        🔥

        • DeadRose

          thank you for reading !

        • sorenbarrett

          A most interesting write in discourse style

          • DeadRose

            Thank you for reading !

            • sorenbarrett

              You are most welcome

            • Doggerel Dave

              Did Ego receive the telegram though...oh? They don't do telegrams anymore? The text message then?

              • DeadRose

                It was sent through email. However it got automatically marked as spam and was unfortunately never read....

                • Doggerel Dave

                  All are blighted by technology - AI to some extent or other....

                • Abdullah123

                  i love this. I have never been able to write a haiku and I admire (and slightly envy😅) those who can... Great write

                  • DeadRose

                    Thanks for reading! I had a hard time doing it at first too. Once you get the syllables mostly there, it opens the way to learning different poetry styles of meter (which is my goal).



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