Ah… heaven and earth
the might of the ground and sky
why creator… why…
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Author:
Demar Desu (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Haiku
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Why not indeed I love to be in your first two lines
The word indeed gives me PTSD flashbacks to job applications
Sorry to hear that
Just a joke Soren…
Glad to hear that
Demar, I’ve felt that kind of question before… standing in something bigger than yourself and not having an answer for it. The way you leave it open, unresolved… that’s what makes it real. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
Thanks my friend, also my last poem about not asking questions… let’s just say April fools
Hahaha! Damn, I should have guessed...but glad to hear! I'd be at a loss without them! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Sometimes it’s not meant to be revealed. I often wonder if we’re supposed to figure out the answer for ourselves, maybe it’s meant to have a different meaning for everyone. Also, are you possibly writing about an earthquake or was it just describing a storm?
Just a storm passing by, covering the mountains 🏔️. I understand the not being revealed until it’s meant for you but sometimes I don’t understand why I even have the crave to know
Oh I see! Sometimes the feeling is too much to bear and that I understand
Well done.
Thank you F
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