A face I once knew
Now strangers
A bird that once flew
Now eternally still
Words that used to be true
Now filled with lies
A ship once with a crew
Now with Davy jones
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Author:
Cheesencrackers (Pseudonym) (
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Nicely done. Your poem reflects on relationships, memories, and the inevitability of change. It contrasts vibrant, lively images with their current desolate states, focusing on the emotional weight of these transformations.
Thank you for your detailed feedback friendship. I appreciate you taking the time to comment and read.
A poem of discovered deception. Well written in such nice poetic form.
Thank you very much Soren, it’s appreciated.
Most welcome
Allie, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet unraveling here that just keeps tightening. Each turn lands a little heavier than the last. That shift from what was to what is…that stays. Powerful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
I really appreciate your continued support, it really means a lot. I’m glad it resonated so much with you.
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