It`s quite an experience
To live without faith
Get wasted
On all kinds of gears
Try to annhiliate
The fears
A futile enterprise
While i am still
Alive
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Mutley Ravishes (
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An existential write that speaks of how we deal with our fears. Nicely done
Thanks for reading, Soren.
You are most welcome
Great poem
Thanks for dropping by, Demar.
Futility sometimes works as an effective wake up call. Good stuff here, Mutley 🙏🕊️
For sure! Reaching a dead end, we need to find a new approach. Thanks for dropping by.
Likewise! Always welcome 🙏🏻🕊️
Mutley, this hit me hard…there’s a raw honesty in how you lay this out, no filters, no softening. That sense of trying to outrun fear and it still being there…that lands. And ending on “Alive”…it feels like both survival and weight at the same time. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Those pesky little i`s causing us so much grief! Lord have mercy. Thanks for dropping by, Tristan.
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