A round orange ball of flame
Meets in a line
With unequal cool white sphere
Their union shocks the universe
Opposite and impossible match
Though both produce lightness to scare away the night
But their union predicts to produce darkness
Leading people to believe that their union as a doom
Yet their union do produce ring of light
like a hope in darkness
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Starlight (
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A lovely view of a total solar eclipse so nicely written in metaphoric style it tells more than astrological information. Very nice
I love the outlook! The message of hopeful in the end hits home!
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